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Jonny,
Overall, pretty good work. There’s a good variety here. Keep looking to more and more dynamic poses. Also please consider using darker lines to describe the overlap of limbs more – the crouched person writing/drawing in particular. It helps bring out those foreshortened forms better.
Good figurative work from high angles, too.
Watch the shoulder in the upper left pose. The tangent created at the hood with the shoulder is what makes this awkward.